Critique Feedback

Positive Feedback:

• Great shadowing
• Accurate colors mixed and used
• Interesting setup
• Good use of mainly primary colors
• "I like the brightness of the yellow, mixed with the deep blue and red, of the apple."
• Nice layering of objects (apple inside bowl)

Critical Feedback:

• Work on the colors of objects in some parts
• Work on the shape of objects
• Work on making things look shiny (i.e. the bowl)
• Make the bowl less white, but make it look more shiny
• Not a lot of detail
• Boring setup
• Could have used more space, and moved the objects around more, and not concentrated to objects in one space

Progress:

• The colors that were mixed look much smoother
• The shadows of the objects make the objects look much rounder
• There is space between the light and the dark in the shadows, it isn't just light --> dark with no space, there is an "intermediate color"
• Didn't cut an objects off (cut off bottom of the bowl in White Objects Painting)